the Process Updated! Page 23 Redone

I recently spent some time back in Canada and while I was there I thought I'd do a little housecleaning on the Process. After completing a few pages after page 23 it was becoming more apparent that that page wasn't up to snuff. It was the first time I used the clouds in a multi-panel and I was perhaps a little timid about expanding elements beyond the edge of the page. That happend more with p 24 and later. So to bring ole 23 up to model, here's a redone version. Enjoy! Page 23